Wednesday, 16 March 2011

tall story of salt rain


i basically wrote this weeks ago (24 january to be exact) Nyah-Nyah a forgotten piece i would say, no memory came out about this til i saw this particular little “poem” in my laptop. an exaggerated metaphoric imagination of ocean waters turning into droplets, (that is undergoing evaporation)  and getting trapped in the sky as clouds. funny imagination Sarcastic smile

imagine that you are being one of the water molecules among the trillions which given hope to be able to fly to sky. and turns out to be nasty when you found out that you are getting trapped in the sky as clouds. very disappointing, right?. a lethal seduction that “pre-planned”; i would say, for us “to be” water molecules. (crazy way to ponder about water Rolling on the floor laughing) ~~indulge~~



an escape through surface
Sick smile
battle out for freedom
Surprised smile
a fight for liberation
Annoyed
cry of the humble brine
Crying face
for every drop of escape,
Clock
shows success of nature
Gift with a bow
tears of the salty waters
Storm cloud
cruel curse for the ocean– wicked yet pleasing


from the ocean to the sky
Airplane
tiny droplets rushed to heaven
Sun
looking down at the perfect earth
Island with a palm tree
it was all none other than a huge blunder
Disappointed smile
sweet escape turned rancid
Wilted rose
when the sky sets the limit
Lightning
no escape no freedom
Broken heart
liberation is perfect fiction
Vampire bat
pass time fable for insane
Freezing
as the tiny waters concern,
Don't tell anyone smile
escape is nothing
Embarrassed smile
stuck in ambiguous space
Alien
it is the perfect trap
DevilDevilDevilDevilDevilDevilDevilDevilDevil

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